2010年8月28日星期六

Hypertext Response project







a. A quotation that shows the importance of place (setting) in the novel.

"By its light I could see that the remnant of standing masonry in which I was lying was all that was left of a church, or perhaps a school- anyhow a building of some size - and that I lay at the foot of a ruined tower."(page 68)










b. A quotation that shows the relationship between two characters.

"My lifelong involvement with Mrs. Dempster began at 5:58 o'clock p.m. on 27 December 1908, at which time I was ten years and seven months old."   (page 1)










c. A quotation that helps establish a metaphor explored in the novel.

''His cry was like the mew of a kitten'' (page13)










d. A quote of the novel, one passage or question that captures the essence, true meaning, of the novel of you.

"So I was alone with my guilt, and it tortured me.” (page 23)


Inquiry Question Guild

1.What is the author's cultural and personal background?
2.What about his author's background qualifies him/her to write this novel?

3. How does the author's personal and cultural background tie into the storyline?
4. How can the author's background tie into poetry and performance?

CREATE 10 QUESTIONS THAT SHOULD BE INCLUDED AS AN INQUIRY GUIDE FOR THIS NOVEL.

1.How does he connect his life to the novel?

2.What is his purpose of writing this novel?
3. How did the time periods influence him?
4. How did the time periods impact his novel?
5. What is the meaning of the title?
6. How does the author’s background relate to the novel?
7. What is the message author what to tell us?
8. What is the massage author what to tell that in the reality?
9. How does the author use his thought in the novel?
10. How does the author use his feelings to apply to the book?


1. What is the author's cultural and personal background?

    
     William Robertson Davies was born on August 28, 1913 in the village of Thamesville, Ontario, Canada. He came from a very old and prominent family.He was a Canadian novelist, playwright, critic, journalist, and professor. He was one of Canada's best-known and most popular authors. Davies was the founding Master of Massey College,a college that was closely associated with the University of Toronto. Davies was surrounded by books as a young boy and both his parents supported reading. Thus Davies caught his parent's love for reading and read everything he could. He also had a particular interest in drama since he participated in theatrical productions as a young child.


2.What about his author's background qualifies him/her to write this novel?


      The novel Fifth Business (1970) came from Davies' own interest in Jungian psychology which included his own in experiences, his love for myth and magic and his knowledge of small-town mores. In the book, the narrator, can somehow relate to Davies himself, as he is an immigrant of Canadian background, with a father who ran the town paper. The book's characters act in roles that roughly correspond to Jungian archetypes according to Davies' belief in the predominance of the spirit over the things of the world.


3. How does the author's personal and cultural background tie into the storyline?

      Davies allows the readers to peer in to his childhood by tying in his own life incidences through the character of Ramsey. In Fifth Business, he mentions accounts of his memories and more of his deeper life experiences. The character of Percy Boyd Staunton is an important reference to Davies’ real life. Some elements of Boy’s life story is drawn from one of his friends Vincent Massey. Both men became rich because of their father’s agricultural businesses. When Vincent Massey becomes the first Canadian- born Governor General, likewise Boy was appointed to be the Lieutenant- Governor of Ontario. The most convincing evidence is that that Boy becomes the Chair of the Board of Governor that runs the school Ramsay teaches at while Davies spent his career at the University of Toronto as the head Professor of Massey College. They were both involved in education purposes.



4. How can the author's background tie into poetry and performance?

      He also participated in theatrical productions as a child, where he developed a lifelong interest in drama.Davies' early life provided him with themes and material to which he would often return in his later work, including the theme of Canadians returning to England to finish their education, and the theatre.in 1916 he became editor of the Peterborough Examiner in the small city of Peterborough, Ontario, northeast of Toronto.Again he was able to mine his experiences here for many of the characters and situations which later appeared in his novels and plays.







Character Sketch

                                                               My Best Friend
   As we grow up, there are many people who we have met during our life time. Each of them may have impact one’s life differently. Some of them might be people who pass your life who are not important to you but some of them may be special. There are many people who appeared in my life and one of them is still in my life today. I could say that this person is very special to me.


    Why is this person so special to me compared to other people in my life? It is because this person is the person who impacted me and helped me become the person I am today. Who is this person? She is my best friend and her name is Michelle. She is the ideal best friend because she is very caring and she will always be there for me.

    When my family moved to Canada from China, my life is already changed. The first day of school was the scariest thing to me because I am a new immigrant to Canada and I could not speak a word of English. I met Michelle first on the first day of school and I could still remember that Michelle was standing behind the window and walked towards me and started speaking to me. After that conversation, I realized that Michelle was a very nice person. We soon became friends and Michelle was the one who helped me with my homework. I would also teach her Chinese and she would help me with my English. I am very thankful to her, for everything she has done for me. My English speaking abilities would still be very poor if it wasn’t for her.

     Michelle is different to other friends I had. She is the one I can tell my secrets to and tell her about my stories when I was a little girl in China. She would always listen attentively to me whenever I have something to say. Whenever I had a problem, I would talk to her about it. If I did anything wrong she will tell me and let myself to find out the mistake and fix it for myself. That way I am learning for myself and not relying on her a lot. She would proofread my homework assignments and uses her own time to help me. She is very patient and would take the time to explain to me anything I do not understand. She is the person who influenced me to become who I am today. I have become more helpful and caring towards others because I want to become like Michelle and be helpful to others as well.

     In addition, Michelle is related to the character in the book I had read called Fifth Business. According to the quote “I don’t know why, but I have the responsibility to take care her.’’ Dunstan in the said in the novel, we can see Michelle and Dunstan, they both don’t have the responsibility. Whether Dunstan takes care of Mary or Michelle help me for the homework. But they both did no matter what; they think that is their responsible to do that.

     In conclusion, throughout our life, we will meet people who are just there but not have a true purpose other than just being there as a friend. However, there are people who are meant to be something special to you in your life. Michelle is the one who impacted me and lead me to who I am today. She is so special to me and will always be my best friend.



Extended Metaphor Poem

Cold as Snow
The guilt is as cold as ice

Eating away my insides

I cannot bear to lift my head up high

As I walk alone on this crowded path

I apologize for the times

When I did not have the courage

To tell the truth but instead

Ignore it and to cause you so much misery

And now as I sit, weary and lonesome

On a cold winter’s night

Trying to find an answer

But the falling snow

Still reminds me of my wrongs

By: Jia Jia Lin

Reference

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fifth_Business#Title

http://www.novalisentertainment.com/rdavies_bio.shtml
http://www.wordiq.com/definition/Robertson_Davies
http://www.poemsource.com/thank-you-poems.html
http://www.werner-saumweber.de/alzheime/poems/sifg.htm
http://www.poemhunter.com/poems/childhood/

Persuasive Essay

                                                           Childhood
     
        Childhood is an important moment in people's lifetime; it is one of the main guide lines which pull one towards the future. Things that happened in the childhood tend to have either positive or negative influences that will stay with them for the rest of their life. In the novel Fifth Business by Robertson Davies, childhood is the main fact that influences the characters in the novel. These characters were definitely influenced by childhood which tends to changed them that they are in the future. The evident that each character seems to run away due to the insecurities that they faced as children. However, childhood is a line that leads Dunstan Ramsey, Paul Dempster and Boy Staunton to their future.


      Throughout the lives of these characters, childhood is one moment that causes the difference in Dunstan’s life. Dunstan lives in the shadow of Boy Staunton, because of guilty and responsibility as the result of a fight. During a fight with Percy Boyd Staunton, Percy threw a snowball that was aimed for Dunstan but instead hit the pregnant Mary Dempster. With this incident, the result was the premature birth of Mary Dempster’s son Paul Dempster. Dunstan felt responsible for what had happened to Paul because he was involved in the fight. He feels like he could drown in his guilt because of the ordeal but he never got the courage to tell the truth to Mary and endured many sleepless nights afterwards. For instance, the snowball incident and Dunstan's relationship with Boy, according to the novel is '' he is my best friend and also is my enemy'' which emphasizes that Dunstan hates Boy at some point because he lied about the snow ball and did not feel guilty at all. Dunstan’s childhood was affected deeply through each situation he faced as a young man, to a highly respected professor. He felt he was the center of all bad things, which occurred around him. Mrs. Demster’s accident was the main influence in his childhood and caused him to feel guilt and become responsible and more caring in his life.

       Childhood is important in Paul's life because it affects him as he gets older. Dunstan is very guilty of Paul’s premature birth and so drops by his house every day to take care of him. “I was perfectly sure; you see that the birth of Paul Dempster, so small, so feeble, and troublesome, was my fault. If I had not been so clever, so sly, so spiteful in hopping in front of the Dempsters just as Percy Boyd Staunton threw that snowball at me from behind, Mrs. Dempster would not have been struck.’’ He is satisfying his own time to take cares of Paul when he was young. When Dunstan is playing with cards one day and needs an audience, he decides to show a magic trick to Paul and he tells Paul stories about saints. He finds out Paul has the ability of magic and starts to teach him. ''But worse - much worse than that- I had taught the boy to cheat with the cards, to handle them like a smoking - car gambler, and also to play tricks with money.'' One day, Mr.Dempster found out that Paul is using the money on the table to do the trick, he believes that is the evil thing Paul is doing. He tells Dunstan never to come to his house again, but Dunstan comes to his house when Mr.Dempster is at work. Dunstan is continuously teaching Paul magic. When Paul gets older, Paul joins a travelling circus and he becomes a famous magician.

     In other hand, Mary who is his mother is the second facts that influence Paul life. Paul Dempster is overwhelmed with guilt, blaming himself for his mother's simple-mindedness and strange behavior. When Paul Dempster grows up and learns about his mother’s demise, he himself feels guilty. When he grows older and understands things clearer, he blamed himself for causing his mother’s illness, because he was told that his birth had caused it. His guilt is amplified when the residents in the town keep their distances from him. After his mother was caught with the tramp performing sexual acts and being discovered by the townsfolk, Paul gets taunted and teased by his schoolmates who make rude comments towards his mother. Later on in life he remembers about his mother but would repress the idea that she was his mother. He becomes a great success as his talents as a magician becomes well known near the end of Paul’s life.

        From Boy’s childhood, it is obvious that he has the stubborn attitude which would lead him to his adulthood. The thing happened in Boy’s childhood is opposite to Ramsey and Paul’s guilty feelings about what has happened to Mrs. Dempster. But reflects his attitude and continuous in his lifelong. Percy, who was the one who threw the snowball, feels absolutely no guilt at all. Throughout the story, readers can see that Percy is a cold-hearted person who is very self-less and only cares for himself and not others. He is ignorant of the pain that he inflicts on others and could hardly care less. ''No, I don't remember what is of no use to me, and I haven't been in Deptford since my father died.'' from that we can see his attitude. He only cares about himself and not guilt at all and live in his own world. At the end of the story, Ramsey reminds him by showing him the stone, which he kept during the years that passed. However Boy is still ignorant and forgot about the incident.

         When Boy married Leola, he eventually gets discovered that he was seeing other women. He treats her like an object rather than a person. He only did it for his own social status rather than his own good. Eventually Leola passes away and being the person who feels absolutely no guilt, he doesn’t bother to show up at her funeral. Later on in the story, Dunstan confronts Percy and reminds him of his responsibility for the dreadful event of Mrs. Dempster and the snowball. By that time Percy is around 60 and has completely forgotten about this incident. Dunstan reminds him by showing him the stone, which he kept during the years that passed which results in Percy’s anger. He does not feel sorry or showed any signs of guilt. If he had feelings of guilt, he would have been more sensitive and apologetic.

     Childhood characteristics are evident in the characters of Dustan Ramsay, Percy Boyd Staunton and Paul Dempster. Their childhood is one major fact that impacted their life. It is a crucial time in which all three characters went through an ordeal that would affect their adulthood.





Re enactment Criteria Guide


1.What event of scene had the most action?
 
     The event that had the most action was Dunstan’s illusion which was the last chapter of the novel. Dunstan finally told the truth to Paul that he had hid in his heart many years ago. His granite paperweight was actually the stone from inside the snowball which Percy threw as a boy, the very snowball which led to the downfall of the Dempster family. I think this event had the most action in the novel because Dunstan threw the stone from his heart that he had deeply hidden for Boy. Now he is doing the thing that he will never done in real life, telling the truth to Paul, Boy was the one who threw the snowball to Mary. This showed the most action in the book.


2.What event made you laugh?

      The event that made me laugh was when Mr.Dempster found out Dunstan taught Paul about magic and told the stories of saint. One day Paul used the money on the table to play the tricks and Mr.Dempster thought that was an evil thing. So he told Dunstan never come to his house again, but Dunstan came to his house when he was at work and he told Mary everything that happened on the outside, since she was locked in the house by Mr. Dempster. I think is funny because Mr.Dempster never thought Dunstan would come to his house again and continue teaching Paul magic and telling the stories of saint.


3. What event gave you a lump in your throat?

       The event that gives me a lump in my throat was the death of Leola. Leola is a very beautiful woman who was Dunstan’s love but actually Dunstan never loved her. After Dunstan left the village, Leola married Boy. She thought Boy really loved her, but as Boy became a successful business man, he started not going home and treated her like an animal not as a human. Simply because she is not intelligent which can’t help him in the business, she was just a beautiful woman that he can bring out. When Dunstan returned to the village, Leola told everything to him because she thought Dunstan still loved her. Until she died, she did not realized that Dunstan and Boy had never really loved her. That is makes me feel sad about Leola’s life because I feel that she is living in an illusion that two men loved her.


4. What event shocked or surprised you?

    The event that shocked me the most was when Dunstan rejected the marriage of Diana. Dunstan was injured in the battle of Ypres and he was unconscious for a few months in a hospital in England. Dunstan was immediately attracted to the pretty nurse, Diana, who took care of him of his wounds. Diana renamed him Dunstan, after the saint, because she thought they had a lot in common. Both Dunstan Ramsay and St. Dunstan share a love for learning, and the disciplined ability to resist temptation. Dunstan resisted temptation by not marrying the lovely Diana. Although he loves her and will remember her to the end of his days, Dunstan was afraid that she, like his mother, will smother him with her love. That surprised me as Dunstan loved her, but he cannot face the thought that Diana had very similar traits that reminded him of his mother and so in the end they become friends instead.



5.What event do you select to write a poem for?  
   The event I select to write a poem for is when Dunstan rejects the mirage of Diana. A love poem is easy to write about and that can show the relationship between Dunstan and Diana. I will talk about how they love each other but they cannot be lovers.


6. write the poem

So Sorry that I Love You


I’m sorry that I love you

But cannot be with you

I’m sorry for all the times

That your tears fell

But I wasn’t able to wipe them away

I’m sorry for all the things you’ve done for me

But I cannot do anything for you

I apologize for the sadness you’ve endured

Even though I knew how much you longed for happiness

However, in the end, I feel that

It’s best that we stay friends

For I am not worthy to be your lover

I hope you will find someone

Who will give you the world

Because you deserve all the happiness in life

I will always remember you

And your kindness

I’m sorry that I love you

But cannot be with you  
BY:JIA JIA LIN